Production Blog- 16/4/2018 Crit: Peer Feedback on Animatic

• A lot of empty space to the sides of the frame in second shot of the animation. Perhaps add foreground elements (bushes, fencing, flowers etc...)

• Unclear as to whether woman is blind. Incorporate walking stick, darker sunglasses maybe?

• Close-up of dead dog not gross enough. Needs more detail; e.g flies on the body, stink lines, denser linework, more discoloured features etc...

• Monsieur Sausage should hold his arm further back to emphasise anticipation when he is about to cut up the dog.

• Dog's bones are too small/not needed. (Remove or enlarge)