- Foreground elements added in second shot. (Bushes, flowers, plants etc...) Frame seems much denser now/visually appealing.
- Monsieur Sausage now passes a menu in braille to the woman when he sits her down to communicate to the audience her blindness.
- More detail (linework) added to insert of the dead dog.
- More blood added to chopping scene. (Moves with his arm)
- Placeholder spaghetti replaced with painted spaghetti.
Crit feedback
- Menu Monsieur Sausage passes is too small.
- Second time we cut back to the boy while MS is chopping up the dog too similar to the first.
- Continuity: Which side of the table is the dog on when it dies? (Make this more clear)
- More frames needed for when MS is grinding up the dog.
- Meat grinder too close to the camera in the shot. (Can't see sausages coming out of it.)
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